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Dreams of Moments

Missing image

Touching until breathless


Warmth of skin


Soaking of moisture within


Caressing the time


Still as the sky


Waiting for you


Dreaming today


Tonight or tomorrow


Life will begin

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    March 8
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    Its always nice to dream but sometmes dreams stasy just dreams. A good write and the pic is fitting.


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    I can tell this poem came from your heart and you mean every word. Nice job on this Conni!


  • spideracer gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    So this poem is one of your first, not a bad effect then. I believe we all can write poetry in some form, There's no magic to it, just whatever flows from your heart. Yes take the advice of last comment and write from your heart.

  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    waiting is no fun but life will continue. A good write for one of your first poems. The more you write the easier it becomes. The secret is write from your heart and what you feel. If I can help you, I will.

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