Touching until breathless
Warmth of skin
Soaking of moisture within
Caressing the time
Still as the sky
Waiting for you
Dreaming today
Tonight or tomorrow
Life will begin
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Its always nice to dream but sometmes dreams stasy just dreams. A good write and the pic is fitting.
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I can tell this poem came from your heart and you mean every word. Nice job on this Conni!


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So this poem is one of your first, not a bad effect then. I believe we all can write poetry in some form, There's no magic to it, just whatever flows from your heart. Yes take the advice of last comment and write from your heart.
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waiting is no fun but life will continue. A good write for one of your first poems. The more you write the easier it becomes. The secret is write from your heart and what you feel. If I can help you, I will.
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