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Where You Are

Missing image

Every thread of my being

Rings out to you

Nights and Days I miss your presences

Living each day to see and touch you

Waking up each morning

Wanting to hear your voice

I will wait eternally for you

As I lay myself down to sleep

Yearning for your caress

Patiently days turn into weeks

Anothers kiss would be so void

Your warmth and lips I desire

Where you are,please come to me

Tenderly I embrace the time

Of waiting for my only one

Wondering where you are?

I love You

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    March 8
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    Wondering adn hopong makes the imagination runwild. Thats whats nice about imagination. It can take you anywhere....


  • Super-man
    October 14, 2008
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    Beautiful

    This is really stunning.
    I can relate.  Time is punishing.


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    GREAT JOB!

    Fine work on this romantic piece! Wonderful words of expression in it. You are brilliant wvtwinklestar!


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    Wondering is not a good thing but there is always hope. I wrote a similar poem, "Waiting for." Like yo said. warmth and love make one yearn for more....