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For A Friend

To recollect on the memories we've shared
and remember the laughter and nasty jokes
that we just had to share with all

I loved how we once were
clam like the ocean
before the storm
that was our friendship

And now we've parted
taking our own paths
just trying to find something new

our friendship now nothing more then the memory
riding the curves of a roller coaster
me screaming in your ear
just having the time of our lives

I miss you
and I wish I could see more of you
but now with an unexpected twist into reality
we've now taken a drop off the deep end into a pool of regret

A drop so treacherous
I'm afraid I'll never see life in your eyes again

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I miss him...
08/02/2008

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Karayan
    August 12, 2008

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    this is a very tear wrenching poem, hun. I am glad that you had the opportunity to share a friendship with him. He may be gone, but will never be forgotten. Good, very good indeed


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 4, 2008

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    i hope he sees this and knows that he means a lot to you, but there is something i have learned it is something you need to tell them and sometimes they come back on their own, keep it flowing


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 2, 2008
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    This is so sad yet heartfelt.
    I hope that whoever you wrote this for
    knows just how important he is to you.
    I love how you just poured out your
    feelings in this. Lovely work my dear
    and thanks so much for sharing it here!
    Take care and good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826