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Stolen Thoughts

i think im falling out of love,
i never was quite there,
you see my hearts been broken lots before,
guess that its that time of year.

i always think of just myself,
but now i see im wrong,
for there is far worse situations around,
than his name missing from my song.

i loved his eyes, his arms, his touch,
but to love is hard as my heart is sore,
i tried to see if it would work,
but i only wish i had met him before.

here i am loosing track of my purpose,
i wanted to say what i felt,
about all the poverty and misfortune,
and not about the cards ive been dealt.

i think i have a real dilemma,
i know there are worse around,
i need some guidance and sense of direction,
otherwise ill head straight for a rebound.

its hard to just shut him out of my head,
when im trying to think of others,
but he lingers and dwells in the back of my mind,
and i find that my head is smothered.

im going to leave him in there for some time,
and avoid all confrontations,
hes not the guy i want to love,
and shall rid all the aggravation.

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  • polly filla
    August 6, 2008
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    interesting jumble of thoughts

    thanks for entering

  • mrgoose
    August 2, 2008

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    gooood stuff

    yeah, definitely your best poem. i can tell you had alot of inspiration for this one as it seems to flow very well.
    life is confusing, isnt it?