Remind me daily
not to indulge
in what-if's and
what-could-be's;
for my imagination
runs rampant, and
my anxieties all
the more increase
until I faint from
lack of sleep.
In a list
Relax from the worries and anxieties that come daily....
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I agree with Lost vampyre angel, it is a very true poem. I also get constant panic attackes, sometimes two in one day.
Great poem
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this is a very true poem. I try not to dwell on them too but often i can't I suffer with anxiety attacks which can kill people odd but true, and I hate them. But the poem is very very good, I love the form its written in
all my love
kitty xxx -
Oh yes indeed
Nights of tossing and turning and repeating no no no just to shut out the what ifs and what could bes in my mind
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faint-LOL...
Boot Keats; try something a little more placid.
Not a chance.
There's a reason this poem was Oscar Wilde's favorite poem, why it brings so many good, healthy thoughts to my head, to my eyes to read.
Thank you for this wonderful little piece, and best wishes to you,
jin
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really great work.
Your poetry shows that writing isn't about huge metaphors, but just getting emotion across. And you did it amazingly.
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What a powerful write! You are right, those dreaded what if's can really get to a person sometimes! I know, I have been there, and somedays, find myself there again....*sigh* but can not change the out come of it
wish I could, but know I can't...
Best of luck in this contest!!
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Awesome, powerful...
Good luck in the contest!!!
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I agree with all your visitors.. Striking.
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amazing
I was completely in love with not only the message but the words in which you used to say it. This is a wonderful piece that everyone should see and read. The simplicity&complexity of life is in every line. This was amazing. You did an awsome job!! I hope you won or will win something in one of the contests it is in. A GREAT PEICE!!! I LOVED IT!!! -
That's really awesome, something we all need to hear from time to time.
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thats... Awesome. It sounds like the same thing I am constantly telling my mom cuz shes always flippin over everything.
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Boomf
this one kind of hits you like a hammer, which I like. Its like the realisation perhaps that all that fretting is a waste of time, donk!
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So true
Wise words, it is better to just let go and go on. -
First of all, very well written poem. I enjoyed it very much. Secondly its hard to get your point across in such a short form but you did so excellently. Now, this is weird I was browsing through the site and suddenly I was led to this poem I dont know how or what happened but it popped up.. So I read it and enjoyed it and thought 'this is exactly how I was feeling earlier today' and here I am leaving a comment rambling on about things.. anyways, great job and good luck.
Malzy
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That's very nice, though small in stature it fills the void. Happy trails
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This is something alot of people can relate to. I know I can. This was penned well and packed with truth.
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I liked it but I didnt understand it. Sry.
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congrats on the spotlight! well deserved...
Wonderful poem!
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Thank you!
I have no idea who nominated me, though.
Wish I did so I could thank them.
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Remind me daily
not to indulge
in what-if's and
what-could-be's;
love that! can relate so much.
amazing job.
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Ravishing!
An absolutely fabulous piece! Words for everybody to live by!
Good luck in the contest!
Best Regards,
Jennifer
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It's like you knew just what I needed to hear. i have been letting worries keep me awake for several nights now. All it did was make me tired LOL. This is wonderful and the message is one everyone should read. Wonderful job!
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my friend
you are so right......... Yesterday is gone and tomorrow I don't yet own. I do own right now though. and right now I can make a huge difference. very thoughtful write my friend, Mark
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