I embrace death to calm my soul
I feel the nothingness that's all of me whole
I catch a glimpse at the falling sun
I deliver myself to the darkened one
Cut the pain
heal the blade
Slice the vein
like a open waterfall
spill out blood
within my pain
I can hear the deadly call
Cut the pain
heal the blade
Addiction makes it's way to my heart
can't stop cutting
can you feel my ruin
can you see I'm shutting
shutting down........
cut the pain
heal the blade
I can feel the darkness of my soul
cry suicide with each tear
no longer in denial
my pain runs deeper than you can ever be aware
cut the pain
heal the blade
Each and every cut
tells of hidden pain
you can't see beyond my black clothes
I'm depressed beyond that
kill my nothingness
replace this bloody mess
Cut the pain
heal the blade
Author notes
Hope you like it I am really depressed right now
A contest entry
- Make It Dark by peregrin.
450 points, ended August 10, 2008, 81 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write. Congrats on winning the contest. You deserve it. this write sent chills up my spine. I love it. Im sorry that you feel depressed. Sadness is a terrible burden.
Great poem.
Dani.
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I love this poem. It is so sad...not depressing...but sad. I love the way you describe your feelings. I am sorry for your depression. If you need any help...you've heard it all before.
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Aw, this is a good poem, sad but good. I dont know you, but why are you depressed? I have gone through depressed stages myself so maybe i can help? Anyways if i cant help thats ok, its still a good poem. Good luck in the contest, im sure you will win.
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Why are you depressed Hun?
Very nice piece!
I like it!
And I can relate!
Talk to me here,
message me!
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