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Cambodian Death Cream

Is hot fire
It haunts my mind like school girl's
wept condom.
A funeral, a busted bell
She winds up her underwear,
and worships tossed coin
Larry Brown's Big Bad Love
I am a devil
My mother's dragon
Father criminal, all hypochondriac  -
- touched, touched, they say
against my love,
but I am no hero
I am no man
I am the hot facial fuck
of poetry in the moment
bringing back the moon
and failures yet to come.

And when you ask if "I love you?"
I point at horns and color.

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  • porksnorkel
    August 4, 2008
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    my ass is a lonely strawberry on the weeping edge of a lawn-dart napkin
    saturday night's alright for fightin
    but what about The Lord's tiretread danish? Will it be rolled up and traded for a fresh blacktopping of the driveway?

    only the standardized cranberry abacus will tell


    • horus8 gold member
      August 6, 2008
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      My ass is a tragedy of the rice pudding sort.


  • loualoui
    August 3, 2008
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    I came here to see if you were still alive... thank God!!

  • luvdrkchocolate
    August 2, 2008

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    Wow. This is good stuff! I don't really understand it all but it's was entertaining to read. I'm glad to see you finally posting something. Quit making us wait all the time!


  • Naughtygrlred
    August 2, 2008
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    holyshite...

    you are the man!

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