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Who?

Who am I
To judge you?
To play like I know you
When I don't even know myself

Who am I
To put you down?
To shove your faults in your face
When they're really my faults

Who am I
To hate you
For accepting yourself for who you are
While I am filled with rage at myself

Who are you
To love me
After I've treated you like shit?
You seem to mock me with your kindness

A contest entry

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  • xrain dancerx
    August 16, 2008

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    its a great poem. i can even relate to it. but its not really what i was looking for, for this contest. but its good!! great job and thanx for entering!
    *hugs* tay.

  • PoodleBoy13
    August 4, 2008

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    i love this poem and i cant even explain why
    but it is amazing
    simple words to discibe complex emotion

    PEACE&WAR
    The -poodle boy-