Who am I
To judge you?
To play like I know you
When I don't even know myself
Who am I
To put you down?
To shove your faults in your face
When they're really my faults
Who am I
To hate you
For accepting yourself for who you are
While I am filled with rage at myself
Who are you
To love me
After I've treated you like shit?
You seem to mock me with your kindness
A contest entry
- well....im not sure. by xrain dancerx.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Did ya like it?
Comments
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its a great poem. i can even relate to it. but its not really what i was looking for, for this contest. but its good!! great job and thanx for entering!
*hugs* tay. -
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yeah...thanks for at least reading it tho
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i love this poem and i cant even explain why
but it is amazing
simple words to discibe complex emotion
PEACE&WAR
The -poodle boy-



