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~ Loved Me So ~

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The love I feel is deep and true
I hold a burning ache for you

The way I feel will never die
I will always be with you by your side

Fate dealt us a hand so strange
one we used to contemplate

How we could deeply love
was it bad - was it good

In the end will we ever know
why the cards of fate came out so

As the years pass and fade
Know my love will always remain -

steadfast and true
no matter what we go through

I will tell you till the end of time
I love you darling, I'm yours...you're mine

And when it's time to say goodbye
I will keep our love as my spirit flies

Whispering your name on my final breath
loving you always...long after death

Within the universe my soul shall roam
content and happy that you loved me so

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A love so deep...you burn for the one you love

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Aww so wonderful are the feelings that flow in perfect rhyme.
    Deep emotional creative love...
    Each stanza was lovely
    Nice to see love in this way
    Lets hope we all can find that

    Julie


    • onesugar gold member
      August 4, 2008
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      It truly is beautiful..Thank you Julie for your lovely comment. ~sugar~


  • Swtpoetryman
    August 2, 2008

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    THE FLAMES OF DESIRE - BURN HOT AND LONG, INDEED!

    I will tell you till the end of time
    I love you darling, I'm yours...you're mine

    This sounds like a love that goes as

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    as the love between me and me lovely lady in me book of poems called SULTRY LIGHT - TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES which is nearly complete and will be off to the publisher soon! A FINE LOVE, to say the least, Sugar! Thanks for sharing this one with me - as always!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    • onesugar gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      It does go deep Earl..the deepest and truest I have ever known...I could burst. Thanks for your fab comment sweetie. As always it's a pleasure, valued and appreciated.
      Love you ~sugar~ xxx

  • twodie4
    August 2, 2008

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    The feeling of a deep undying love jumps out off this page. This is one of the most beautiful love poems I have read in a long time...breathtaking. I also believe that when you experience a deep burning love it does continue beyond death. Who is he sugar?? lol

    Emma


    • onesugar gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Em it is just the best hon. Not saying Em

      Thanks for the fab comment, truly appreciated.

      ~sugar~


  • Ephiphany
    August 2, 2008

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    Oh my

    this is absolutely Gorgeous sugarcookie
    I love that picture you have, and everything just flowed well in Love should I say. Very lovely, indeed.

    Thanks for sharing your Beauty sis
    Piff


    • onesugar gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Thanks you sis, your comments always leave me with a smile.

      Valued and appreciated

      ~sugarcookie~

  • midnightblue1272
    August 2, 2008
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    Lovely.

    Beautiful words of love & passion expressed here. Good work, sis.


    • onesugar gold member
      August 2, 2008
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      Thank you bro

      feelings from the heart. Appreciate you reading and commenting. Love & ~sugar~

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