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Exquisite Delight

No more inarticulating rhyme
That disturbs one's thoughts
Reflecting images so sublime
Pure unaffected words of truth
Poetically enhanced with diction
No more volatile words, uncouth
Simple words, like adorable
Longing for your smile
Take my hand in yours
Let's go that extra mile
Yes! that is what makes up this word bank
Wondering what to write
Especially concerning poetry
Turning darkness into light
Expressing one's own imaginings
Having no more doubts or fears
Reaching out for words so pure
That can wipe out all the tears
Yes! beautiful words of wisdom
Letting in the light             
Sheer uninhibited poetry
What! Exquisite Delight!

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  • Loki silver member
    August 2, 2008
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    The, line 18 and 20
    Or, line 16

    Thanks for trying, good luck in future contests.