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My Abyss

My Body Rots.
Inside this coffin.
Reflecting on a life.
Of emptiness.

No heaven.
No Hell.
Only nothingness.
Abyss of apathy.

No savior.
Only Sorrow.
No worse than life.
I suppose.

Please tell me what you think

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  • NyteShade
    October 9
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    Loved the first stanza. Nicely done


  • tony yates silver member
    August 24

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    refreshing read

    the poem has a wonderful mood, i enjoyed this, it leaves the reader contemplating - which is great poetry. superb vocabulary used here, well done friend.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 24

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    Painful piece here. The feeling of apathy is as "painful" as any other in its painless state.


  • UnpardonableSin
    December 25, 2008
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    this is a really good poem. Wonder why I never commented it before.

  • Shadow Darkstar
    August 2, 2008

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    I like it.
    Probably more so because I'm in an 'emo' mood.
    Just stressed out really bad...
    But this kinda made me smile, as dark as this is.
    Thanks.
    ♥

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