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Happy “Wiggle Your Toes” Day!

Short and pink
or long and thin…

Let them out!
Don’t keep them in.

If you need an excuse
to let them play
bring them over
any day!

Massage or tickle
or lick a while.
Enjoy your toes;
they’re versatile!

Happy wiggling!


Author notes

August 7 IS “Wiggle Your Toes Day.” Odd as it seems, it is real . See http://www.holidayinsights.com/moreholidays/August/wiggleyourtoes.htm
Prompt: Unusual Greeting Cards
Picture Credit: http://angelsfalldown1.deviantart.com/art/No-longer-Afraid-73305573

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  • daviscth silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    Congratulations on winning the gold. I will now go wiggle my toes.


  • Tehuni
    August 20, 2008

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    That is a very cute poem, I can imagine it so well in a card too, one of those pamphlet-y ones. I like the "Massage or tickle or lick a while" best

  • aaaaaaaa
    August 20, 2008
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    haha this is great. congrats on gold


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Congrats on the Gold my friend
    and hmm mm nope not into foot fetish

    but a good massage
    and you have a date


  • daviscth silver member
    August 13, 2008
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    LOL!!! This is wonderfully done. They should stop the contest and give you the gold now.


  • Fourthaxis
    August 12, 2008

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    "or lick a while.
    Enjoy your toes;
    they’re versatile!"
    Honestly, "lick them"?
    I really liked this, short and sweet!
    Best wishes!


  • PatheticKt
    August 11, 2008

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    Seriously? Aww, I didn't even celebrate!
    *wiggles toes* belated wiggle your toes day!
    Lick a while part was weird, btw
    Haha, anyway, cute piece this is, indeed ^^


    • KayJay
      August 11, 2008
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      You're too young to know about "foot fetishes"... a really strange one and one I've only heard about Thank you for your read and your comment... always most appreciated...
      Ken


  • NotAMolly
    August 4, 2008

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    I can't believe that's a real holiday! Yes! fabulous job!
    And how did you know how versatile my toes are
    I really enjoyed this one, great job!
    Jenn


  • Lucy.
    August 3, 2008
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    Okey dokey


  • Judith Chandler
    August 3, 2008
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    An original take on the prompt and an enjoyable write.


  • Yunalonei
    August 3, 2008
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    Hmmmm

    This is very weird and yet i think it is very cool.


  • jcat gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Well if I thought that I was in love before I am positive now!!! I have the biggest foot fetish!!! Geesh!!! You are the BOMB!! Loved this......Best wishes


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    LOL I wasn't sure at first you were talking about toes lmao Great write Ken and best of luck..too cute!

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