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My Sweet Knight ~ His Angel's Lament

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High atop my lonely tower I pine,
aching to be held, within the circle
of your loving arms

Through the long nights; when I reach out
to find only an empty space, in this bed
where you belong

Your journeys take you far away, to lands
filled with danger; yet, I know your heart
rests safely here

When you return, triumphant and glowing,
I will open my arms and hold you to me
never letting you go again

Oh, the nights we'll spend, limbs entwined as
we revisit all those tender moments
when you take me to paradise

You're like a drug that invades my body
I tremble and shiver, aching for your touch;
my only weakness, I need you so much

You make my mind spin and whirl;
I don't want to sleep when you're here
and I can't sleep when you're not

If my wishes were to be granted, they would be
for you to spend eternity within these castle walls
loving me, as only you can, my sweet Knight

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Ladies I wish to see, do you want a Knight to save you...or do you want a Hot Elf in tight leather?

No matter how I tried I couldn't make this an Adult poem...sorry sis

As for the tight leather...hmmmm, that would be nice too



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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 8, 2008
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    Thank you for picking that which suits you.

    and writing for my contest.

    Riftkin


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Sigh.. oh how gorgeously romantic!! I'm all for the Knight myself.. of course he too can wear tight leather! hehe

    Beautiful hun!!

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    • Margaret Denham gold member
      August 4, 2008
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      Hmmmm...that leather certainly does do something to enhance the charm doesn't it honey?

      Thank you for the lovely comment



      Love Margaret


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Very tasteful, the way 'good' romantic poetry should be.


    All the best,
    Love and peace always,
    mj.