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Tears were the elegance saturating my lashes with scars and fears,

for the warmth had dissolved between a blanket of isolation,

believing that the pages between the bindings of a fairy tale were nothing

but the odd rust of myths that were never meant to breath nor live;

Yet silent you were long just an AP aunt to me who tenderly graced words

with a truth that I can and still can not see, for it was and still remains

passionately hard too see past the cold reflection of my mirror,

yet somewhere between the two glass keyboards is a power that you have

to make me sense the tingle of shivers on my spine that I am something,

but something more for in your heart I do believe I became a someone.

 

It was the way that when my feet began to run you simply linked

your fingers with my thumb and mind, asking with a softest tone to not hide

because the picture had not been fully painted; yet silently I cried

that I was ignorant and nothing but a mere selfish child who wanted only

a hand to hold and arms to be cradled in when humid thunder would pour.

Like a pulse there was suddenly a rare occasion of butterflies when I simply

labeled myself as no one else's but your simple girl behind the screen;

So why is it that when your gone I think and miss the way that you sooth me

away from the stress of panics, and every log on I ask to see your name.

 

And I wondered, had I missed all the dates to listen to the lyrics of you,

calling me your baby girl, where suddenly the mood would resemble tears

now represents that of a smile; I had been the weaklings to the roots of

the weed that would be pulled up from the soil,

but now I am a fighter for you made me believe that to jump was to fly,

and every-time I close my eyes or for a moment feel that I can not breath or sing

I remember that somewhere across an ocean you have and will believe me.

 

True love differs from each nectar as does every rose in a field,

but each one is the beginning of a brand new fairy tale that can never be compared,

for it is a passion of feelings that lives in two combined souls.

Author notes

I never write a happy nor a love poem, so this is out of the comfort box, I do apologise if it is lame.

Dedicated to someone special, they should know who they are/

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  • I really like this poem... I think it is wild and true. You sounds very wise, and knowledgeable.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 7

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    Your love shows here and you are one that holds plenty,
    blessed are we to have your AP person that kept you here for you are someone .. someone special

    please never ever forget that.

    Joann

  • This is beautiful hunni xxx


  • truetome
    August 4

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    many emotions shared in this poem. I am glad you wrote it and shared it here ~ the author expresses herself well! good luck in the contest. Love, truetome
  • marvelous hon you pretty much nailed i must admit i think you know how to explain your feelings well in love wise now okay teach me i loved it good luck in the contest

  • trekkergirl gold member
    August 3
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    no not lame at all. Well done


  • Rheea gold member
    August 2

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    This is what makes a woman a woman. What a beautiful tribute to a woman who loved with heart and made something good from it.


  • darell silver member
    August 2

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    BreathTaking!

    Wow wow wow! I adore this poem. In my eyes
    its fascinating. A mind blowing experience
    in enchantment and true love. You take us through
    the portal of emotions with brush strokes of
    gentleness and ecstasy. I don't know who you are
    but I respect this eloquently written piece.
    You made me wish that I was the object of your
    admiration. Brilliant writing

  • This is breathtaking. Truly, this was a fabulous piece.
    Your word usage and the emotions that flowed from your words were amazing.

  • Oh ... oh my goodness ... This is ... beautiful! I am breathless, you have stolen the air from my lungs and the beats in my heart. *cries* This is the most beautiful thing anyone has ever done.

    I love you so much, and I just want you to know that I am here for you no matter what. You are such a beautiful person inside and out. I love the way you smile, when you throw your hair back because it's in your eyes, your words that flow through your fingers, your everything. You are such an amazing person. I would do anything for you and anything for you to know that I love you and that you deserve the world!

    I believe in you my love. You will make it through the tough times no matter what, and I will always be by your side. You are strong and strong willed. You just have to believe in yourself. Smile with love and laugh with care.

    I ♥ You
    Chantelle

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