I’ll always be your friend
Even while you’re serving time once again
But I will never ever understand
Why you would steal a mini van
You knew you couldn’t drive
Now you’re doing two to five
A contest entry
- Care Enough To Write The Very Best by NotAMolly.
800 points, ended August 20, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - options quickie by Midnite wolf.
580 points, ended August 25, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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great write, the message is good n clear, friends really should be there through thick and thin and those who are, are the best of friends, thanks for entering
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Excellent
Wonderful creation. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you so very much. God Bless
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Thank you so much
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Hehehe. Friendship know no bounds! Great one! I wish I had a friend like that, willing to stand by me even after grand theft auto and driving with out a license. But I think maybe they were probably drunk when they did it, haha.
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Thank you so much. I'm thinking about going into the card business. I can't seem to stop. Your contest is a great idea lol
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Now there's a good friend, standing by this guy (or girl maybe) while reminding him where he went wrong. And it's nice for him to get some mail while he's behind bars.
jjj
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Thank you very much. Can't you just imagine reading this poem in a Hallmark Store. LOL
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Great
This piece is well put together and very very funny. -
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Thank you. Isn't this a great idea for a contest. lol Have a blessed day.
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Funny and edgy!
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Thank you so much, God Bless
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