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Expiration of the Tell Tale Heart


so much promise,
it dripped from wet lips,
puddling on the ground for you to step in

ripples shatter the illusion of perfect harmony

perfect circles vibrating into normalcy

and I am gone,
dreams have been passive to disease,
and the rotting process is far too gone...


the decay grips and reminds
nothing can be fine again




Author notes

I feel the dream in me expire
line from Seether, "fine again"

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  • Unsigned gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    It is such a powerful line and you used it well

    Good luck

    Si