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Congrats on your 1st week anniversary

Confetti still hides in your clothes
The smell of flowers still hangs in the air
Fresh, new exciting alive
Reminding you of those unforgettable lines

The ones that will bind you forever
After just 7 days your still fresh so new
Wedding all over, fuss died down
Take time now to enjoy yourself

Cause in a few years time
You wont know the other half
They ll be like a monster in curlers
Or stained nasty, pongy t shirt.

Congratulations only another century to go.

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 14, 2008

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    Haha, nice write. I actually attended a weeding last night. Wonder if they'll be celebrating their one week anniversary in 6 days. Best of luck in the contest.


  • aeolia
    August 7, 2008
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    Do you mean "century"? It always helps to run spellcheck and also to do a little proofreading before and after you post just to get things that spellcheck can't, like mistakes with your/you're, and so on.

    Good take on the prompt... sucks to have to celebrate a 1-week anniversary. I wonder how long people who 'jump the gun' so much actually last with their partners.

    -hiraeth


    • Storminbrenda silver member
      August 9, 2008
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      Lol funny you should say that

      I just did that without first reading your comment i ve now got spellcheck.net on my favs and goingto post my next spellchecked poem thanks for the help

    • Storminbrenda silver member
      August 8, 2008
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      i did mean century

      im not sure how to use it on this site or maybe i should do it before posting thanks for pointing it out im not very gd with spelling

      • aeolia
        August 8, 2008
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        If you don't have MS Word or another word processor with spellcheck, there's always www.spellcheck.net. Just type in "spellcheck" in a search engine and even more options should come up.

  • Storminbrenda silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    thank u

    I dont know what made me just put this down i had to add the funny bit as you did say unusal and thats def me and my mind, thanks for the comment. So glad it made you laugh


  • NotAMolly
    August 4, 2008
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    ok, I was a little concerned that you took the prompt idea, instead of coming up with a new idea, BUT...
    That was freakin' hysterical! the last stanza made me LMAO!
    "They ll be like a monster in curlers
    Or stained nasty, pongy t shirt."
    That's brilliant.
    Jenn

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