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!The Corner!

I don't like school.
I think it's boring.
If you peak into my class,
you'll find me snoring.

We don't do anything fun at all
I'm falling asleep
I'm going to fall
right out of my chair
I'll make a big "boom"
I knew it was coming
I'm led to my doom
right to the corner
I've been there before
but this time it's worse
I'm there for an hour
It's taking forever
what did I do?
I'll make an excuse
say I was tying my shoe
This will take my whole life
why should she care
all i did was fall out of my chair
the bell has rung
it's almost four
finally I swish right out the door.

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Written in the 6th grade... one golden find, huh...

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  • LittleAnn
    August 17, 2008

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    Wow, sweet write...
    I've written one poem about falling asleep at school once, but it's in German so I can't share it with anyone on AP.
    Oh well... I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
    Keep on writing!
    Annie


  • daviscth silver member
    August 17, 2008
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    I think this is a wonderful school poem and I'm delighted you took time to post it in my contest.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 4, 2008

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    lol, i never got the corner in the sixth grade, well since i found a way to fall asleep there, keep it flowing