CHORUS:
American Melody
What happened to the harmony
American Melody
End of all our sovereignty
V.1:
Look at our world today
I have no idea why we made it this way
All the sickness death and pain
How do we make it go away
CHORUS
V.2:
I close my eyes just to think
To wonder why the world is so obscene
I close my eyes just to dream
Just so I can get some sleep
CHORUS
V.3:
I stick my nose out just to smell
All the pollution that fills the air
I stick my hand out just to feel
Just to see if the rain is real
CHORUS
repeat CHORUS twice
Author notes
wrote this April 5, 2007. I think it's a good song, you don't have to think so, critisism makes me happy enough, good or bad. more songs, click link: http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog&Mytoken=4D3B9AA5-5EF0-47A3-B36811E8B76180D9305785999
A contest entry
- something for everyone by -shiningstars-.
1100 points, ended August 16, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Very nice. the first chorus is perfect, bask in it for a moment.
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I liked the set up of your rhyming. Nice job. My favorite is your third verse, "I stick my nose out just to smell
All the pollution that fills the air
I stick my hand out just to feel
Just to see if the rain is real."
~mackenzie
good luck
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