How many weeks until I finally find
That it has been months, and you're still on my mind
Remembering your face and the memories you left me
Hating life more now, again, you I'll never see
I'll never get to go back to where you dwell
So, I love you more than words can ever tell
A contest entry
- Bang Bang, my baby shot me down... by Sick Sunshine.
400 points, ended November 10, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love and hope....poems from the heart by XxAloneXScaredxX.
400 points, ended February 5, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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hey baby, i miss you! nice piece. punctuate though kelsey peyton!! LOVE YOU
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Nice write with feelings standing out like a light. Very nice work
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I love this!
All your poems are so cute, but sad. Hope you win the contest
,,,although i haven't checked out the competition...
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sad poem. It's always hard when you lose the one you love. Excellent job. really full of emotions.
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ahhh! your in my mind! you know what im thinking!!
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