Show me the roses that bloom in the spring
I need to believe, and not in just anything!
Let the sun "Shine" thru this wounded mans soul
it's so hard to go on when their is no control
The shadow of doubt has shown its face today
hoping it might steal my faith another way
These trials will not break me ~For it is said
the strength is inside for what lays ahead
Allow me the patience to again see clear
and show your mercy to all that hold you near
These eyes need not see when sense holds the key
so I lay down my burdens and come follow thee...
A contest entry
- yet not lost... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 4, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Self denial, must take place before we can follow Him, I love this poem as well - wow, you write with true spirit lol
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good luck in contest.
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Travelling inside of the self is most favorite scenario of the poets..and you are there..well done..I love it...and my thanks for sharing it with me...
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i have let my demons and past do a lot to me, i like this poem cause it reminds me, i ain't done yet, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I sure hope so for I have had my shadows to steal my faith. I can relate to every word of your write. I keep telling my self after my husband died not to make me bitter but better it a hard struggle great work.
I love all of it -
Still working is good - better than not working at all. Nice to see you posting again. Been a while. Will check when completed. Keep writing...
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