God is a woman:
She creates.
Life springs from her fingertips,
Mother
Nature is just the beginning.
Who else gives birth to the world?
Woman, you have a touch that is supreme.
God is a woman:
She heals.
Life kept in good condition,
Mother
Goddess is essential loving.
Who else keeps mercy in her heart?
Woman, you have a touch that is magical.
Author notes
OPTION #4 Quote inspired. Another awesome quote, we are obviously poets in the company of genius'. I attempted to change the 'Woman' line, but nothing else worked.
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A contest entry
- What is the answer to life, universe and everything? by Dark Otter.
600 points, ended August 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Who denies her right to rule?
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YES !
the proof of your statement : HE is containted in SHE ...
which makes me ponder over the "eva created out of adam's rib" story ... hmmmmm ... well ...
I feel that it's time that goddess-power reemerges on earth to heal all the damage done by the abuse of masculine energies ... (this has nothing to do with the sexes, of course) ...
thank you for creating and sharing this inspired and inspiring verse ...
may it bear fruit in the minds of all those who stop by your page ...
maa
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I was waiting for this response
Thank you for another point of view. I believe that the creator is masculine and the feminine embodiment. I respect the Goddess and all she means to the Pagan/Wiccan community.
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Interesting.
A wonderful and unique creation. Thank you for sharing
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