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Her Other-self.

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She stood at the scene of her own nightmare.

The horror reflected in the shiny surface of the mirrored walls, The stage, where the bodies where piled, had an eerie red glow, and the smell of blood turned her stomach, What had she done? She couldnt remember anything.

Apart from the screams and crys of the children as she butchered them.

The school production would be cancelled in the morning.

And she would take center stage, But not in the school.

The judge would slam his hammer, and she would be taken away to the cold grey walls of the jail.

 But this wasnt the end, Oh no, Because her inner demon had only just started.

Author notes

Yep, its a short story. Its confusing in places i know, But that adds to the effect. ^^

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  • Matt Holck
    August 2, 2008
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    it's a turn to atteck theworld ibstead of being hurt by it