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The Sea

Many go to the sea
to set their emotions free.
The sea, the most wonderful listener,
though he never replies,
the hearts, the sorrows,
the pain, the love,
the anguish, all he takes.

So, if your eyes could clearly see,
you'd see the hearts floating in the sea!


by: Nada Adel Sobhi

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  • Lorien
    August 3, 2008
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    wow that is so true i actually went to the beach yesterday great job nooni


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 3, 2008
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    the seas/ocean tell stories of their own and harbour the often unspoken thoughts and stories we tell of our hopes, love, and disdain. your write speaks profound truth and the tears of yeartache that spills within the salty waters of courage. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


  • suseann
    August 2, 2008

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    The sea does capture the senses and holds all of history's wistful passionate secrets never devulging a one.And you've graced the reader with profound truths in poetic images through your exquisite writing.