Technicolor yawns filled with lies
Broken home & broken communication ties
Why won’t the yelling cease?
Why can’t I be left in peace?
I tried so hard to be numb & emotionless
But all of those efforts turned into a mess
Why can’t I be strong?
Why don’t I belong?
I’m so angry at everyone I see
But so angry at me being me
Why do I easily break?
Why do I make the same mistake?
Walls around me are crumbling
& I can feel myself stumbling
Why am I so far from perfect?
Why am I such a defect?
Sometimes I long to grow wings
& fly away from such things
I’d fly so very far away
Into the break of day
Where I couldn’t be found
Where I wouldn’t hear a sound
Author notes
It was recommended by my psychologist that I write this poem to let some emotion out. I was really pissed off one day at school & I didn't know why so she told me to write a poem about it. It's called wall boxing because I bruised my hand really badly when I decided to take my anger out on a brick wall. Enjoy!
What did you think?
Comments
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A very strong write of emotions...I know how it feels, sometimes when we can not find a way to release anger we harm ourselves...(like hitting walls)...I used to bang my head...growing up is never easy...
You wrote it well, with nice flow and rhyme...keeping writing and working it out.
Best to you!
mystic
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"Technicolor yawns filled with lies"
lol at english...
anyway...
Ahhh, don't feel so bad. Though it may seem to you all of this is true, its not, so don't fret.
The rhyming was absolutely orgsm and it flowed so damn well.
"I tried so hard to be numb & emotionless"
We all know you have emotions, but theres nothing wrong with wanting to hide it, just don't from the people who care.
"Walls around me are crumbling"
yeah, it is crumbling, only because you hit it though, shows how strong you are =D maybe you could beat me in a wrestling match....
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