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There Are Friends That Are Leaving

The autumn
and everyone is gone;
roots without trees
and leaves without
the ground,

and I am left
to myself
and my own doubt.

No seriously...don't read this. I posted this so I can remember it.

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  • suup jordan
    May 10

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    i get it.
    id rather read the fifth line without the word "the" though. idk thats just me.
    other than that one word, however, its a great write in very few lines.