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Equo ne credite, Quidquid id est.

*kindly refer to Author's Notes*

 

Should fools rush in where Angles would fear to tread ? 

 

Past promise starred in white on black

now, coward, bows to stark attack,

as Miss amiss,  remiss of bliss

no gift transmits, no parting kiss,

no passing flow may tide love back,

just unjust torture, stretched on rack.

 

Yet Gift in German cannot lack

ironic understanding - fact

plague vision curse calls as abyss

replaces metamorphosis

which, stifled now, has got the sack,

past glory's presents must repack.

 

Hope, once held high, down vortex crack

has fallen low, nor trace, nor track,

will leave - one day proclaimed "Exist !"

next, angels laid to rest, "Desist !"

cried, while bloom memories most stack

mind mirage prove, lost dreams, alack !

 

Crimson confession sin intact
stunts bloom, busts boom, turns fancy fact
doomed, fall too steep to handle - this
is gloom tomb room antithesis
of love's dreams to autodidact
contradicts fair thought, false act.

 

O brave new world's new dawn, alack,

it seems consistency has lacked,

'acceptance' as hypothesis

is wanting found, ground zero, this

can't stay unmoved, guilt weighs, frame tack

round aura gilt gleams inexact.

 

From heart in heat to cold urn plaque,

to grave from rave one step, one smack,

to void from telekinesis,

from wishful thinking reminisce,

from common ground can truth back-track  

to grounded flight, light dowsed, wretch wracked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Konbanwa ! cruel world...

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Contest "You Could Have Been The Real One"

“Equo ne credite, Teucri ! Quidquid id est, timeo Danaos et dona ferentes”,
Do not trust the horse, Trojans! Whatever it is, I fear the Greeks even if bearing gifts”.
Virgil Aenid II 49
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timeo_Danaos_et_dona_ferentes

Contemporary multi-lingual transliteration 'and in-house joke'
Chevauchez les rêves tu cries
“Don't believe in (dream) horses !" you cry, "I fear geeks, even if they bring gifts”.
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Should fools rush in where Angles would fear to tread ?
non Angeli sed Angli

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Gift in German : Poison
rack : an instrument of torture to stretch, disjoint or mutilate victims
wrack : smash or break forcefully
autodidact : self-taught

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  • Oresama
    October 9, 2008
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    mein leibt is mein gift

    beautiful, simply beautiful

  • Topnotchsy
    September 3, 2008
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    Wow, I really like this piece. The pictures, the rhyming and wordplay etc. were all great.

  • Asabouros.
    August 2, 2008

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    Wow, I do like this, quite a bit actually.

    un_42_nately I am a creature of lower intelligence and can only barely grasp concepts...though I did enjoy this piece, it was very well done and the rhyming was classic.