My dreams of love everlasting lay upon your sea of hearts
Illusions bring me to a place I can regain the Lord's grace
In-between many planets trying to tear my faith apart
Souls who have their best interest at hand but I can't be replaced
Feelings come and go, but allow my words to sink into you
Sincere melodies dance upon stages of sweet desires
As I tap my fingertips I bestow my hues golden blue
And cherish this very moment my soul soars a bit higher
Seek always truth by letting patience take action in silence
Know things come full circle as sure as the sun sets quietly
Let all who know you get a glimpse into your precious essence
I for one am blessed to be able to say you care for me
Let these pieces we pen turn into sweet peace others read
I remain humble as well as hopeful we all plant love's seed
A contest entry
- PIF ~ Picture Prompt Contest by Stardust-luvr.
850 points, ended August 8, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Need Some Love
Comments
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aww this was really sweet.
you did a wonderful job with that picture.. so soft a red.. beautiful. 
Angel
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I am truly at a loss for words in this one! You speak with love, hope, kindness and wonder in this one! I love it! This is truly well worth the gold!
andlove
Nyetta
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Such sweet and faithful amour, a delighful read!
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Awesome write...I loved the ending..."Let these pieces we pen turn into sweet peace others read
I remain humble as well as hopeful we all plant love's seed" How truly beautiful!!
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Very Beautiful!!!
Congratulations on the gold!!! Peace, Cyn
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This is so beautiful, your writing always gives me this sense of wonder. I feel almost insignificant while still lifted to a higher level of understanding. Your musings and thoughts are amazing, as always.
Much love,
Your AP Daughter and Friend
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A Beauty~
I meant to read this earlier and my computer hiccuped-
This is a Beauty my Friend and Love the emotions also rhyme- flowed like champagne over a waterfall
Excellent take on the prompt~
also Inspired the masses
Love this!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Awww so lovely and moving!
Awww so lovely and moving! Beautiful loving caring and altruistic sentiments all beautofully wrapped up in poetic graphics and excellent flow and rhyme, wow this is talent, you sure have a way with words, and this is a fabulous piece of poetric empathic artistry. Bravo, love it, well done!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Brillent
My dear friend
Words of truth and love freely wrote from His fingers to your pen.
Thank you for blessing this reader.
Hugs
~Lisa~
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Awesome
Love it!! So rich and passionate!!
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your words speak so much truth in hope and faith and above all undeniable love held true unconditionally. love and friendship is a blessing for all to cherish. a beautiful write that brought me to tears flowing that I had to stop crying b4 i could comment. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxxx
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Beautifully written and a real treasure to read, thank you. You should do well in this contest. Love the boarder too.
She-ra
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Definately
this is beautiful and in Truth. Reality in Life my dear friend. I really enjoyed this and wish you all the best in the contest.
Always,
Ephiphany
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poeticweaver, flesh and blood didn't reveal these things to you, in Christ you live and move, and have your being, just as certain as your a true poet- you are also of His offspring. be blessed in the contest and smile
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Seek always truth by letting patience take action in silence
Know things come full circle as sure as the sun sets quietly
Let all who know you get a glimpse into your precious essence
I for one am blessed to be able to say you care for me
i love these lines they really touched me tonight i have been feeling restless and upset wondering why all these things happen in such a short time. It hard for me to be quiet because i am upset thanks for this poem I truly need some uplifting words in a bad way tonight.
much love you ap sis brenda
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This is just beautiful! The tender, soft words you have used show a heart full of loving emotions.
Thank you so much for sharing such a delicate piece
All the best with this.
Gaylene
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Sincere melodies dance upon stages of sweet desires.... I love this line. The whole poem is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck with the contest
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What an absolutely beautiful semi-sonnet. You truly have a captivating way with words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest you have entered. Lovely background too!
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the visuals alone made me go "wow"
then the words...wowowoww!! you have so much to encourage others!! it's a rather inspirational love piece! aww my favorite stanza was def the third one, how you opened it up with patience and ended it with the reward. this is beautiful, pup!!!!! 
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Beautifully written...
Good luck in the contest, Big Brother!!! I'm wishing all the best to you and your love
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And indeed come full circle. Cause I love you forevermore.
You are,
You are the shining beams from a light house,
the rays of the brightest sun
within your eyes my dear one can always find
the path to love and endearment
You hold the candle of my soul
and forever will you flicker
For I am the house that will guard you
and no wind should ever blow you out.
Always and forever, your sweet soul
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