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Watch This Lover Unravel

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Within each petals hold   
a new scent of passion released 
your curves are so right 
as fingertips gently teased  
kiss me tonight  
and watch this lover unravel  
the sheets beneath your form  

soft delicate movements   
your breathing now becomes increased  
sweet whispers pour out 
bodies molding with heated vice  
as you grip on   
caresses from tongues, lips and mouths 
fires burning, flames are high  

Sexy petals are spread  
two above, two below, nicely 
focus on your bud  
licking, pinching, teasing, you moan  
parting you wide 
tongue slides completely within you 
as fingers trail your breasts 

'Nuff you said, ride instead  
sprawling above you, flesh to flesh 
our tongues entwine 
hands playing, moisture starts to rise 
sweet scent of you 
fingertips makes a trail below 
petals parted they play  

in and out they slide fast 
my is head buried in your neck  
your bodies arching   
beneath mine, grinding in rhythm 
mouth finds nipples 
your mouth sucking its way to mine 
the pressure is building 

to the bedside I go 
a special friend for us to share 
double ended toy 
to bring pleasure a new height 
mouth wraps it tight 
getting it nice and wet for you 
inserted it you moaned 

Vaseline I'm rubbing 
my end for a most heated ride 
she slides in and out 
sweet sexy little vixen plays 
heated I mount
her hands in the middle gripping 
my mound gets her hands wet 

Up and down I ride hard  
my fingers pinching hard nipples 
hers teasing my clit  
bodies now glistening with  sweat  
moans start to rise  
leaning forward I bite her lips  
as her nails scratch my ass  

oh this rose beneath me 
really knows how to light my fire  
petals of passion   
wrapping perfectly around me 
both satisfied  
mouths interlock our pussy's grind  
passion sparks ecstasy  

Author notes

A contest entry for:
Lady Love (Adult Lesbian Poems Wanted)


It’s called an Alliterisen

1st line- x syllables = 6 syllables
2nd line- x +2 syllables = 8 syllables
3rd line- x -1 syllables = 5 syllables
4th line- (x +2) or -1 syllables = 8 or 5 syllables
5th line- x -2 syllables = 4 syllables
6th line- (x+2) or -2 syllables = 4 or 8 syllables
7th line- x syllables = 6 syllables


Background credit to AP Hubby Griswold Thanks!! and Love ya

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Comments

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  • HisDirtyLiLPoet
    August 3, 2008

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    You did a splendid job penning this Alliterisen. They're quite fun to write,huh? Sensual and spicy! Who can't appreciate that as well? Yeah baby! woohoo! You should do well in this contest, my friend.

    She-ra


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    I checked each stanza and all seem to be perfectly to form. You may have troubles with your memory but you remain a brilliant form poet whatever happens.
    But that doesn't much the form is incidental to a brilliantly hot piece of writing.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    August 2, 2008

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    Wowie....you really know it all don't you???

    I'm off...to shower and than....

    No not to bed with my GF ...but to work nightshifts

    Hope all is well with you
    XXJeannette


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Honestly..

    I love how you explain the forms in which you write, but when it comes to a sexual masterpiece like this?
    I COULDN'T CARE LESS WHAT FORM IT'S IN! This could've been written in crayon and the heat would still melt a hole in the screen!


  • Griswold gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Very nicely and hotly written "piece" here honey. and an "Alliterisen" to top it all off. I never even tried one of these, i could never figure out the instructions, It looks like Algebra to me, I HATE Algebra. Love you sweetheart. Scott


  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    This is great! Love the background!
    Vaseline I'm rubbing
    my end for a most heated ride
    she slides in and out
    sweet sexy little vixen plays
    heated I mount
    her hands in the middle gripping
    my mound gets her hands wet
    Good Luck!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Bravo Sweet And Sexy Soul!

    Another erotic, sensual, passionate filled masterpiece!
    Thanks for sharing you with all us here my dear.

    Peace, and lots of love.
    -Timothy


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Oh my love this is one Smokin & Hot write. wow, I really enjoyed this a lot.. felt like I was right there with you.. ooh brings very nice thoughts to my mind.

    love this so much.. I love you more

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • Volfeng
    August 2, 2008

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    Very hot write here, Babe love it and you..

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