Author notes
A contest entry for:
Lady Love (Adult Lesbian Poems Wanted)
It’s called an Alliterisen
1st line- x syllables = 6 syllables
2nd line- x +2 syllables = 8 syllables
3rd line- x -1 syllables = 5 syllables
4th line- (x +2) or -1 syllables = 8 or 5 syllables
5th line- x -2 syllables = 4 syllables
6th line- (x+2) or -2 syllables = 4 or 8 syllables
7th line- x syllables = 6 syllables
Background credit to AP Hubby Griswold Thanks!! and Love ya
A contest entry
- Lady Love (Adult Lesbian Poems Wanted) by Sesheta.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You did a splendid job penning this Alliterisen.
They're quite fun to write,huh? Sensual and spicy! Who can't appreciate that as well? Yeah baby! woohoo! You should do well in this contest, my friend.
She-ra

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I checked each stanza and all seem to be perfectly to form. You may have troubles with your memory but you remain a brilliant form poet whatever happens.
But that doesn't much the form is incidental to a brilliantly hot piece of writing.

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Wowie....you really know it all don't you???
I'm off...to shower and than....
No not to bed with my GF
...but to work nightshifts
Hope all is well with you

XXJeannette


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Honestly..
I love how you explain the forms in which you write, but when it comes to a sexual masterpiece like this?
I COULDN'T CARE LESS WHAT FORM IT'S IN! This could've been written in crayon and the heat would still melt a hole in the screen!


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Very nicely and hotly written "piece" here honey. and an "Alliterisen" to top it all off. I never even tried one of these, i could never figure out the instructions, It looks like Algebra to me, I HATE Algebra. Love you sweetheart. Scott


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This is great! Love the background!
Vaseline I'm rubbing
my end for a most heated ride
she slides in and out
sweet sexy little vixen plays
heated I mount
her hands in the middle gripping
my mound gets her hands wet
Good Luck!


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Bravo Sweet And Sexy Soul!
Another erotic, sensual, passionate filled masterpiece!
Thanks for sharing you with all us here my dear.
Peace, and lots of love.
-Timothy


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I Love you sweet soul..
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Love you too.
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Oh my love this is one Smokin & Hot write. wow, I really enjoyed this a lot.. felt like I was right there with you.. ooh brings very nice thoughts to my mind.

love this so much.. I love you more
good luck in the contest
kat




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I love you to sweetheart.
Thanks for reading it.
your the g/f you know lol.. -
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yes I know my love.. I love you..


I love the bg that Griswold made..
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Very hot write here, Babe



love it and you..













