My world changed,
It was not the same
as before; the sights,
sounds, even smells
all became subdued
except for my heart
screaming in pain.
A contest entry
- solitude by tara wilson.
2700 points, ended August 20, 2008, 42 entries
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it always amazes me how life changes because of the people in, or not remaining in our lives...affecting us..every day, our thoughts, what we do with them...that is a big part of what makes us who we are...this is ache in solitude, indeed, thanks for this entry, Micheal
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Solitude as a consequence of loss. Sadness with the solitude. Good take on the prompt.
Thanks for this.
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This is very well written.
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Wow.. I can imagine it will be exactly the same when my mother passes. You loved her deeply I can tell. You seem to be bringing me to tears a lot tonight!
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Oooooo
what is this a tear falls upon my cheek? I knew my mother as a child, watched her die as a child. I know this pain to well as a adult. Well done.
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MJ
This my friend is so great...
One of your best in my opinion.
I know your pain my friend and certainly felt it in this penning.
♥Becky♥
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Powerful poem indeed.
It's about your mother dying but could be used to describe many a situation.
I hope that broken heart mends.
Samuel
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