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afraid of the light

Peeking Out
      looking At the wonders
                      Of the light
Searching
      To see if I
              Belong
In a world
      So beautiful

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20 words

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Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Beautiful

    If you see the light indeed you are so blessed and are welcome to enter this beauty and know their is love if one will believe and reach out and love they shall hold indeed


  • Redeemed15
    August 21, 2008

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    I love that quote: Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!


  • echo-ink
    August 8, 2008
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    Short, sweet, and beautiful.

    PL

  • Redeemed15
    August 6, 2008
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    Awesome job. Love it! So short yet filled with hope!


  • StarEyes
    August 3, 2008

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    WOW! What a great job you did on this one! I really the dark, yet hopefully outlook in this one! Fantastic my friend!!!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • SingPraiz4Hym
    August 2, 2008

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    From one who has felt I've looked on the outside in many times, this truly touched me. So does the prompt. But you are seeing the beauty of the world not the ugly of it and that instills hope and courage for us to take the step into that light. Good luck in the contest.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 2, 2008

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    This is a great take on the prompt. It is full of wonder. The answer is .. yes you do belong in a beautiful world.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    ahhh excellent poem that you have written. believe it or not I too at one point was hidden in the shadows. the light isn't anything to be afraid of.. though I had those exact same fears at one time. sometimes I still wonder if I made the right decision, by coming into the light. I'm waiting for you, the light is beautiful. I'm here sissy waiting for you.

    I love your take on the prompt. your poem is outstanding.

    good luck

    kat

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