Gave you my shattered heart
You've glued some pieces together
IT's starting to look like a heart again
Because of you tonight Im feeling better
I don't know how I'll get through all this
I just know I feel so safe with you
and that it seems I can keep going on for now
I just hope that all you do and say are true
I'm letting my broken heart go
wondering where you've been all this time
I've been lost for so long
But your the only one who's figuring out my mind
Thank you for all you've done
And thanks for sticking around when I can't talk
Your wonderful to me
On my life you've made a special mark
Author notes
Picture by http://ashadowinthemoon.deviantart.com/art/Forbidden-Love-92258898
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt.. points will increase by whispernthedark.
675 points, ended August 2, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Deep Poetry For Lonely Person by Redeemed15.
425 points, ended August 7, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Rhyme/ pre-writes welcome by ever1der.
300 points, ended August 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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This contest is for non trophy winner's, sorry, this was awsome, though.
PL
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Very Good poem. I like how your lines flow together and aren't choppy. I love that your poem is connected from one line to another. Good Luck.
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awww so sweet and so cute.. .and so... good... congrats on silver sis well deserved... I love this...
Gave you my shattered heart
You've glued some pieces together
IT's starting to look like a heart again
Because of you tonight Im feeling better
wonderful lines! Great job!
love ya sis!
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Michelle,
I see why this took Silver! This is fantastic! I know the feelings in wish you spoke as this one was wrote! You did a wonderful job on this one!!
and love
Nyetta
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I really liked this too. The prompt was excellent, whisper. Then this poet took it brought deeper meaning to it in such a hopeful way. Good luck in the contest1
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I really love where you took this prompt. Once our heart has been shattered, it is not so easy to trust someone with it's handling again. Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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I loved this picture...and what you wrote was so heartfelt...
"I'm letting my broken heart go
wondering where you've been all this time
I've been lost for so long
But your the only one who's figuring out my mind"
Sometimes there's that one particular person that can figure us out and they don't even realize it unless they try. Hopefully that person can continue doing good for you because everyone deserves it at one point or another.
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I like this alot Michelle. It is a great poem to someone who has helped you out and stood by you. I am happy to see this side of you.
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