whispered words and a delicate pink rose
a feminine face softly glows and smiles
silken scarves, sparkly baubles and candied treats
cause hearts to palpitate in breathless confusion
yet I prefer passion's groans, agonized moans
growls, piercing screams of hard earned satiation
ending in spasms as bodies slowly release
suspiration of life's raison d'être
whatever makes the blood rush, brings forth the flush
that tints cheeks in a roseate pleasure palette
Author notes
Picture Credit: Luis Royo
A contest entry
- Now You Make Me Blush, Won gold in comp from Penman and am passing it on, winner please PIF 300 points by Topaze.
450 points, ended August 12, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Erotic Challenge Season 9 by Master Ktulu.
550 points, ended February 9, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Genuinely Honest Comments Please
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I found this one rather intriguing ... it borders on the edge of becoming, well, exceptionally sexy
My opinion is that you have given us a hint of what you could do if pushed
I have, however, noted that there is no punctuation in this one but please keep in mind that for future entries in this challenge all the judges are rather stringent in their judging ... welcome to the challenge and I have a feeling that you will not let us down
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This was beautifully written
congrats on the silver.
Riftkin
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Thank you Riftkin! Appreciated.
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This is sensual and delicately steamy. I think I am blushing now.
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Blush away
it becomes you!
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A lovely piece wonderfully written. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.
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Most appreciated, Topaz. Thank you for the silver
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a good piece that uses alliteration well and to full effect - ah to blush in those moments of love, that is what we all live ofr - the red goal where passion sparks us alive.
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oooooh I love this one~~~
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