What do you
get with
A sun set
Love making
and Us
a life time of pain
Erased by
A day in your arms
Suduced by your love
I found the will
To be strong again
Author notes
Option #2
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/specialStar/sunsetboatrkx.jpg
A contest entry
- PIF ~ Picture Prompt Contest by Stardust-luvr.
850 points, ended August 8, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - -♥-~*Beautiful*~-♥- by xwarriorXprincessx.
900 points, ended August 18, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
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ABSOLUTELY.
perfect. this is B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! sooooooo well written. so simple but so sure... so powerful... so romantic... oy, my had is spinning!
this is good stuff, my friend. whoever inspired this is a lucky person, because let me tell ya.... you certainly have a way with words.
oy... i'm still feeling a little light headed from reading it the first time. and i've read it thrice since then....
my oh my... what an excellent write. very very very very very well done. -
love may hurt but the memories strive giving strength when we feel we have lost all hope and courage. the setting sun gives peace and helps ease away the heartache our spirits may feel. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx
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This is fantastic!! Reminds me of someone....*sigh* But Oh well... Love the read!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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I really enjoyed your take on this picture, making it personal and memorable. You painted a great vision both from the sunset standpoint but also how it touches you emotionally too. Good luck.
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awww.. so nicely penned..I love it!
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Bravo
very well done, there is much truth in your words. Good luck, Boog -
Well I say..."Be seduced.....Be seduced...." It is so good for the cleansing of the soul!!! And damn it feels good in the interm!! I liked this alot...Best wishes
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A beautiful picture and a wonderfully hopeful and romantic poem! Well done my friend!
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I like this, the emotions are very subtle yet ring true, good luck in the contest
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I love it. I like these new feelings that you are expressing tonight. Great job. Keep up the positive work.
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