tender moments
clasps my heart,
as love sings
inside my eden
precious melodies
lay in essence of joy,
while petal soft kisses
touch emotional ease
embracing passion's song.
Author notes
Prompt is the picture. found at photobuck.com
20-40 words
A contest entry
- Friday Night Quickie~ by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended August 1, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn that silver into GOLD pt 7 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended September 20, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh you brought that picture to life. This is gorgeous. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Very nicely done and congrats on Silver.
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Thank you young man
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Sigh.. how softly enticing and lovely sis! You have definitely captured the beauty in that picture! Congrats on the silver!
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Isn't the pic just gorgeous? I enjoyed doing this one alot. Thank you for your kind comment Sis, much appreciated.
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Wow, another gorgeous piece!
I love your style of writing.
A beautiful piece to go with this
lovely portrait that you have found.
Well done and congratulations to you
on your Silver trophy! Thanks for
sharing it here!
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The pic was the prompt and isn't it gorgeous? Your words are deeply encouraging and highly appreciated. Thank you so much.
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What a lyrical and lovely interpretation... "embracing passion's song"... simply beautiful.
Ken
Oh, congratulations on the silver shiny
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You were warned about the flattery LOL Isn't the pic beautiful? I just had to write for it. Glad you liked it and thank you ever so much for your kind words.
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Nice job on the poem. It fits the prompt very well. It is soft and tender as 'petal soft kisses'. Congratulations on the silver cup.
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Thank you dear one..I'm glad you liked it. And as always, a pleasure to see you
(have you still got your History hat on) lol
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A wonderful write and so very fitting for the picture
Congratulations on your trophy!
gaylene
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Thank you dear, much appreciated.
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Good luck
Carolina's song caresses the moon with beautiful words.
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Aww that's such a nice comment, thank you. I appreciate your kindness.
Linda
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awe... So beautiful and so very fitting for the picture. Wonderful entry, Thank you
Delila
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Wow, quite unexpected, thank you soooooo much. Glad you enjoyed my take on the beautiful prompt!
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