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Captured by You




A mind,
sharp, brilliant,
beautifully bi-polar,
creates poems of love
pain and sensuality,
capturing me...
                  completely.

Verbal contortions
bend my thoughts,
in directions
they have never traveled.

Your fingers write
and massage the words
rhythmically...
                  deeply, into my soul.

Your physical beauty
ensconced my heart,
and I am enchanted
with your spirit.

I long to kiss your scars,
swallow your pain,
then trace my heart
softly upon yours.

                  You move me.




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Another Anniversary congrats to my friend.

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  • BellaD
    August 15, 2008
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    Beautiful poem. Congrats on the well-deserved Gold.


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Aww........
    Wow!!! This brought tears to my eyes.

    "Thank you" isn't enough.

    You are amazing. You're an amazing poet, amazing friend, wonderful at giving advice... and so much more.

    I am just stunned.

    I love the slight alliteration... well done.

    The last line:

    "You move me" - probably the most simply stated, elegant ending to a poem ever.

    Definitely an awesome write, awesome dedication, and.... exquisite entry! I'm sooooo happy! Thank you so much.