To invoke.... invoke? inner self.
Being apart of a realization.
Should I forsake the signs,
the butterflies they bring
"take a snap shot"
Shivers from a warm breeze,
quit like a kiss, something, please!
Instead... run away, someplace new
don't forget this face!
Days will pass by, nights of cold.
Shivers will subside
a quit life, quit and mine.
My feelings may change,
my heart beating slower,
this secret of mine will not!
There will be no change, how I admire
admire the days I see this face...
craving for sound, a voice so smooth.
Somewhat un-heard of...
Say la vee
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For you with lots of love
what did you first think, how did it make you feel, whats with the name?
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A poem full of emotions. Raw and beautiful and just so to the point on emotions, Keep on writing!
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Very abstract, I've had to read it more than a few times and I think I'm getting there. Nevertheless, abstraction doesn't detract from the enjoyment. The way you structured it certainly suggests disjointed thought and possibly elements of conflict. Definitely different and always good to read something more original. Thanks for sharing.
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Days will pass by, nights of cold.
Shivers will subside
a quit life, quit and mine.
love that.
this was kind of abstract, but I liked it.
Being apart of a realization.
apart --> a part
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