Electoral considerations aside;
indefinite storms
have always continued-
-historical paths…
Twisting fingers
to scrape the skin
off incidentals,
coincidentals placed;
the source
is elementary:
Humans are predatory.
Author notes
Prompt: of clay and bone
A contest entry
- ...of clay and bone by zochit2me.
1850 points, ended August 23, 2008, 18 entries
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*smack* This one makes us take a long hard look at human nature, and though we may not wish to believe what we see, point in fact is, we are predatory.
Excellent and this background is out of this world. The artist in you is shining here.
AMAZING. ~Pamela 
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A political flavor, perhaps anyone who gains a position of authority and trust tend to end up predatory, they often say that greed and power go together, I haven't see anything yet to dismiss this. Nice write. Love, C
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oh and this background rocks
lol -
interesting take on this prompt...
excellent choice of words to make a point.
bec -
this is amazing.
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