tell me again how you think that im perfect,
cause deep down inside i know that im worthless,
speak to me these lies,
once again,
and let me take it in!
i need to hear it one more time
speak to me my beloved lies
hide the truth, that i just cant seem to face,
and help me escape
these lies.
broken down inside
theres no where left to hide,
so speak to me my lies, once more,
and help me find a cure!
i need to hear it one more time
speak to me my beloved lies
hide the truth, that i just cant seem to face,
and help me escape
these lies.
no where to go, no where to hide, im forced to face all my lies!
i cant escape who i want to be, so teach me to love me, lies.
i need to hear it one more time
speak to me my beloved lies
hide the truth, that i just cant seem to face,
and help me escape
these lies.
Author notes
this is actually the first song im ever written so sorry for the lack of lyrics...
A contest entry
- Songwriting by Apocalyptic Scarves.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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okay, i finally figured out how to change the font color
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First things first!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE pretty PLEASE! Change your font colour! My computer doesnt like highlighting lol!
I like the way to keep on mentioning lies, it seems the lies are holding this piece together (Obviously not in the actual definition of the word)
Pretty cool song you got here
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LOL i had fun highlighting. And common sense eventually led me to the latter so yes. While my previous comment still remains, I am in love with this piece b/c i often feel like tht. It felt like you wrote tht just for me, even though you didnt. beautiful. good luck in the contest
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has an heads up you shoul seriously change the color of the font or the background itself. I cant even see the txt. It would be a real waste tht you entered what prolly would be a nice piece but no one cud see it.
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sorry! i didn't know the words would come out black!
just highlight it to see the lyrics!
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