It's all your fault
That I put this gun to my head
It's your fault I pulled the trigger
All the hurt, the pain, the yelling
I just couldn't take it anymore
You pushed me to the edge
The blood is on your hands
Though it's invisible to everyone, but me and you
I know that you'll be happy without me
I know you'll go have a thrill since I'm dead
You can be thankful
I've done what you always wanted to do
I could see it in your eyes
I could see how much you wanted to kill me
Well, now I've made your dream come true
I hope your happy
I couldn't stand knowing that you hated me so
I tried hard to make myself stand out
Tried to make you proud of me
Though nothing worked
It was no use
So now I'm dead
It's all your fault
Oh, you feel guilty now?
Well, you deserve it
You made me this way
You made me take the gun
It was you that did this to me
You should feel guilty
Though in my heart I know you won't
I know you won't give a damn
Know that you are going to celebrate
Know you are going to throw a party because I'm dead
Author notes
LoveToLaugh07
A contest entry
- Suicide Note by newnoakua.
700 points, ended August 6, 2008, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
It's time for a wake! WOOT!
This is majorly passive aggressive angst, I'm not a big fan of that. But you wrote it well, so props for that.
-
i love this because you put so much anger and emotion into this piece..
you made me feel what you were feeling..
and i truly hope this isn't how you feel..
because i know i write about how i feel and it's stuff like this and i really hope that this poem wasn't just for a contest i hope that it's not a sign letting people know you are very depressed..
BRAVO!!!!
-
I'm really glad this is for a contest and not really... lol
It's uber depressing but really really good
I love it! well..not the topic. Good luck in the contest
luvs ya! bffl
-
Wow... just...
Wow.
Such an emotional piece. So much anger radiated through it, it made me angry as I read and I didn't even write it. Such a great job!
Great job and good luck in the contest!!! -
Wow i hope you win the contest or at least place. it has real emotion behind it now was there some other emotions in this poem other than the contest prompt?
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
