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Regret (acrostic)

Remorseful to the fullest
Extent that
Good nature will allow.
Retaining these pent up
Emotions is slowly
Tearing me apart.

A contest entry

Lives inside this concrete cell

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  • Tqop
    April 9

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    Great:

    Very good. I love the middle and the end about how your trying to keep yourself together. Good job. Nicely polished.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    nicely said, blunt, but good, thanks so much for entering and good luck
    take care, Stephanie ♥