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The Truth Lies Within...

Spewed lies used to
slap me with spittle, and
shadow me with shame.

Enlightened,
with shifted perspective,

those lies were a map to my truth...

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25 words or less solitude

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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    sometimes, it's a little bumpy to get to the smooth road/place we're meant to go...thanks so much for this entry


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    Another job well done you keep writing I'll keep reading, Boog

  • Topnotchsy
    August 16, 2008
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    Another great poem. Love the last line especially but it's great from beginning to end.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 13, 2008

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    Wow, the depth of this write defies the imagination, at least it does mine...awesome take on the prompt-good luck to you lol


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    A revelaton in solitude. Fine take on the prompt, I'd say.
    Thanks for this.


  • Riamh
    August 4, 2008
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    Thats a beautiful peace that reads well aloud! well done.


  • righteousme
    August 2, 2008
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    and your truth is most important... especially to you and your kids... love ya!!! great piece.!!!

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