Spewed lies used to
slap me with spittle, and
shadow me with shame.
Enlightened,
with shifted perspective,
those lies were a map to my truth...
Author notes
25 words or less solitude
In a list
A contest entry
- solitude by tara wilson.
2700 points, ended August 20, 2008, 42 entries
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Comments
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sometimes, it's a little bumpy to get to the smooth road/place we're meant to go...thanks so much for this entry


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Another job well done you keep writing I'll keep reading, Boog


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Another great poem. Love the last line especially but it's great from beginning to end.
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Wow, the depth of this write defies the imagination, at least it does mine...awesome take on the prompt-good luck to you lol


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A revelaton in solitude. Fine take on the prompt, I'd say.
Thanks for this.

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Thats a beautiful peace that reads well aloud! well done.
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and your truth is most important... especially to you and your kids... love ya!!! great piece.!!!


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