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knives sharp as tounuges

Lies soft as shadows
Corrupt my sweet love
with warm skin
and tender brush
lies soft as shadows
corrupt my beautiful love
with fiery hearts
and light blush
lies soft as shadows
corrupt me my love
with sweet lies
and wicked wills

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  • Madam Cutter
    August 14, 2008

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    I like this one too.
    But it makes me want to kill you in the slowest way possible... Is that a bad thing?


  • xrain dancerx
    August 1, 2008

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    i liked it. "corrupt me my love with sweet lies and wicked wills" thats my fav part. beautiful poem.
    *hugs* tay.