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Eremitic Silence

Amongst the hordes of golden fields,
I stand in eremitic silence.
A flash of crimson thought explodes,
a single rose brings me home.

 

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Prompt: I am looking for an observation made in solitude.

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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    oh - this has me looking up the word eremitic....lol..

    it is funny how a vision of something like this, in some place can bring us to another..I like this poem...thanks so much for your entry


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    Provocative piece ... strong imagery ... and you bring it all home at the end.
    Thanks for this.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 3, 2008
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    This works!


  • The Poetic Angel
    August 2, 2008

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    great write on prompt Jems

    i havent seen a short write from you in a long time

    i love You

    xxx Your angel xxx