Learning to survive
On my own
But what's wrong with
Dreaming about the gold?
Should I be sad?
Should I walk away?
Your little hands
And your little feet
A little nose against the glass
Butterfly barely fluttering past
Author notes
Not sure I did this right.. I think so.. Poem 2.. lines 1&2.. Poem 3.. Lines 3&4 and so on in that fashion from the last 6 actual poems I wrote..
And I find it incredibly IRONIC.. that the title name of my last poem is same as your actual name. lol The poem is about songs.. 
I know I don't have to, Just in case you think it is an incredibly odd write like I do lol Here they are..
Title: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4475089
1st 2 lines: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4474979
2nd 2 lines: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4470059
3rd 2 lines: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4455141
4th 2 lines: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4426879
5th 2 lines: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4387367
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ A funny take on "Cento" ~~ Yet AGAIN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
:)
Comments
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At first I didn't understand what you were trying to write...
Uhmm, I still don't, but I'm intrigued, please let me in!
Audrey Palmer
aka rubyvaroom
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AWW. I saw a person walking away leaving a child pressing against the glass hoping you turn around. I know it's just coincidence but it's kind of cool that it tells a story.
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Your poem is precious! *grin*
This darling poem went right to my heart because it sounds so affectionate.
The rules are that you take the first two lines of each poem from poem number 2 to poem number 6. You took lines farther down in your poems, apparently. 
BUT do not do it over, because you patched your poem together so sweetly and I love it. 
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