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I need to Breathe

Baby can't you see I can't breathe...
Can't you tell I can't stand it when your around anymore...
I can't stand you!!!
I don't know how anyone can stand you.
Its always "Baby I can do it...Don't worry I got it...You don't have to get up sweetheart..."
But no you asked my best friend out while we were still dating.
HOW DARE YOU!
How dare you say you love me but you ask her out. She is like my sister.
You told her not to tell me because it would make our relationship awkward.
Well sweetie  I think you did that just fine by yourself because she told me that you asked her and she turned you down flat because she values our friendship more than you.
What does that say about you, honey?
My best guess is that your no casa nova like you think you are.
So honey this is good bye FOREVER!
We are no more because I can't breathe around you and I can't stand you.

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This poem is dedicated to me ex-boyfriend who said he loved me but instead he suffocated me, but I am happy now because I have a loving understanding boyfriend.

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  • Shydreamer3
    August 1, 2008
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    Great job thanks for entering you will be considered.