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Alone In The Twilight

There is no better delight
Than awakening in the morning
Flowers
Always delight
Nine butterflies doing their thing
Only eight in flight, ninth has no wing
Wisdom
Is knowing
My makeover is finally done
Am I not now the most handsome one

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  • crazymomma
    August 1, 2008

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    LOL!!! I have no clue why I like this so much. I think this contest is a cool one. I thought I was the only one with lines that didn't go together well. This is so cute. I wish I could see how handsome you are LOL


  • Melodies
    August 1, 2008

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    Darling poem! Oh YES!

    You have stitched together a delightful poem that made me smile and think "WHAT??? SO CUTE!!" Yes, you are definitely the most handsome one. I loved the flowers and butterflies, too.