Alone in the twilight
of my being
I relive
my shattered dreams
In a list
A contest entry
- solitude by tara wilson.
2700 points, ended August 20, 2008, 42 entries
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we always think of alternate endings to the 'day' of our life, don't we? I like this...very simple, but it leads to some interesting thoughts in my mind..thank you for this entry
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Blast of truth and reality here. You've explained why a lot of folks cannot be alone.
Thanks for this.
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Yes, solitude and memories, nice write!
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Moving
This sounds quite wistful. Exquisite reflections. Well penned, dear poet!
I never like to relive my broken dreams, they induce me into a state of depression!
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