Timelessness coming to bear
upon one's spirit
leaves definite indentations
upon the 'crest' of one's soul.
As all stands still,
deep contemplation
consoles.
A contest entry
- solitude by tara wilson.
2700 points, ended August 20, 2008, 42 entries
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yes...a time to contemplate everything...we need this time to do that...thanks so much for this entry
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The frozen moment. Great and particular take on the prompt. The poem invites us to consider how the opportunity to contemplate can console us.
Thanks for this.
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a good poem penned, ah yes there is deep contemplation in the domain of soitude, but there is also boredom that ravages the spirit. still, it is the life for some.
a good poem penned, ah yes there is deep contemplation in the domain of soitude, but there is also boredom that ravages the spirit. still, it is the life for some.
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Ian, I was just thinking of you...and someone is worried about you-Melodies lol are you okay?
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As all stands still,
deep contemplation
consoles.
Love it!
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Thank you so much lol
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