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Hard To Say

You don't know how hard this is to say.
But you really  hurt me that one day.
I showed you a side of me even I didn't know existed.
It scared me half to death, car full of strangers and you missed it.
I love you, but I hate you.
Please, please say you love me too.

I know I should just let it go.
But I can't. I want to though.
It's hard to say on pen and paper what I could never say to your face
Although it's how I feel.

I can't say anymore.
The choice is yours.
Please don't hurt me again.
I still hurt from the last time, 5 months ago.
But please, I beg, please don't hurt me again.

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Same as last one. even more exaggeration though.

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    6 hours ago
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    this is a true feeling
    I like the line it is hard to say on pen and paper what I could never say to your face
    for me it is easier to think about what I would say
    then to say it to someone

  • Kira65
    June 25
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    it is a very god poem, i can fell the emotions screaming from within in poem! my favorite part is


    I can't say anymore.
    The choice is yours.
    Please don't hurt me again.
    I still hurt from the last time, 5 months ago.
    But please, I beg, please don't hurt me again

  • Slick
    August 28, 2008

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    wow!!!

    wow!!! this is pretty good... though it is sad have a nice day and keep up the good work!!! -slick99